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Ashfur on Squirrelflight

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I loved you.
I really did.

The mere sight of you
Would make me stop,
The breath catch in my throat,
My head turn light,
My beautiful Squirrelflight.

But you loved him.
All along,
You loved him.

And I know now
That every time you looked at me
- And your eyes,
You lovely green eyes,
So fresh and wild,
So untamed,
Just like your soul, -
That every time you looked at me,
And I looked back,
And I thought you loved me,
I know now I was wrong.
That all along,
When you looked at me,
You saw him.
You saw memories.
You saw what you were,
What you had,
What you lost.

You and him,
You went through so much.
Shared so much,
Loved so much,
Lost so much.

And loved again.

I loved you.
I loved you.

But you never loved me.
No, you never loved me.
A short Warriors poem I wrote a few months back. It's Ashfur speaking about how he feels when Squirrelflight left him for Brambleclaw.
I appreciate many people hate Ashfur and this will cause some debate, as it did on my main account, but if you have something particularly nasty to say please keep it to yourself.
Recently I did a pic to go with this, it's on my main account (*Spottedfire94) Here: [link]
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MeredithTheElf's avatar
I really feel like Ashfur is misunderstood. 
Like. 
So many people think he's a bad guy. 
But he was just heartbroken.